Animated short 3: The Archer

This is a wonderful animation! Short but sweet, as they say. The color, though it is dull, blends well, and it makes that little splatter of blood POP! It gives off a gloomy sort of feel, and the rain certainly helps. Honestly, I've never seen an archer pony before, so your originality there really works, but the gloomy scene, the rain... it's kind of cliche. But other than that, it's great in that factor. Your technique... i'm not one to be judging, but i think the rain could use some extra work, and the hoof holding the string should recoil after the arrow was shot. Again, this is better than i could ever do, but i think you could improve a bit. The impact really works, it gives off a really cool vibe, the bright colors pop against the dullness. I think this animation is very wonderful, and with a tiny bit of work, it'll turn our 20 percent cooler <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="387" title=" (Wink)"/>!